Evan:  What’s working: I really like your first paragraph. I think it’s a great way to hook someone into the story as well…

This past weekend I headed downtown in Biddeford to cover a story on the holiday lighting. UNE students volunteered to help hang the…

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This week I got to write an on-campus story about a professor at UNE who teaches squirrelology. Along with the interview, I was…

Wen:  For the Mariner:This feels like a very dramatic, dark, beginning of a story or that it could be extended into a story….

Anthony Ewing has been a loyal coach to the University of New England’s Women’s Basketball teams since 2007.  Previously at Brandeis University as…

If you have entered the years of  A teen, you have entered the darkness. One’s teen years consist of A bumpy road: Trouble,…

I am human  I am very sensitive I bottle up my feelings I overthink too often I am very sensitive  Being sensitive is…

Since being assigned my subject, Anthony Ewing (UNE’s Women’s head Basketball coach), I have emailed him to set up an interview but am…