Sydney’s Feature:

A potential thing to add to this story would be the difficulty of balancing social life vs. academic life. Sure finding a nice, comforting, quiet spot to study is important but there is also a matter of fear of missing out when you are stuck staying in working on homework. Another thing you could add in is what the switch was like from high school classes to college classes, having to practically teach yourself the material and how all the responsibility is on you since no one is constantly on your back about assignments. On the other hand, you got a good lede going on, along with smooth transitions. Including a Professor’s POV was a nice touch. When wrapping up the story, I like the way you asked the student readers a question regarding your topic choice.

Anthony’s Feature:

Honestly, not much to improve on in my opinion you gave a lot of good information for the reader. Except working on wrapping up the conclusion is a definite. It lacks being tied together with the rest of the story. You did a nice job explaining the differences between living styles as well as getting input from students in multiple dorms so nothing is biased. The article could benefit from clearer organization and smoother transitions between sections. Maybe introducing a brief overview of the housing options before diving into specific details would provide better context. A clearer distinction between personal opinions and factual descriptions would help.