Journal #4

In Sarah Braunstein’s short story “Abject Naturalism,” she mentions a very common style found in a lot of literary short stories today. She describes it as a set of writing rules that have practically become some sort of formula. The style uses simple and emotionless language to portray characters who are trapped and passive. They will often be victims of a mundane reality with low-wage jobs, addiction, or depression. These stories pay close attention to the ugly details of life, presenting them without judgment or sentiment. A key thing is that nothing much really happens. For example, the plot isn’t about change, but more so about staying stuck. The endings are almost always vague and unresolved, leaving the reader with questions. Braunstein’s main point is that while writers use this style to seem realistic—avoiding anything that might feel sentimental or fake—it has instead become  kind of predictable. By constantly rejecting hope, the style risks making stories feel numbingly similar and emotionally distant. In trying so hard to avoid being too cheery or false, it can forget to offer the reader a more complex experience. She suggests that this “abject naturalism” might mistake a narrow kind of sadness for true depth.

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